Love causes insomnia,,,,

Morning is the time

when people are awake

bedazzled thoughts

in the night

often breaks

Sunlight  ignites

my pervert poetry

They rescue me from

the darkness…

Insomnia maligns

my sleepy world

poetry grows with the moon

eleviating my soul

I  dive in your thoughts

Of rapturous romantic vision

Words are not enough,

travelling through the wires

I dream of permanent

 scandalous nights !

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Comments (14)
  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 16, 2011

    Nicely phrased.

  • Dreamy777 on Jul 16, 2011

    great poem

  • sambasivarao on Jul 16, 2011

    Handsome poetry

  • article on Jul 16, 2011

    omg so romantic … written with feelngs
    nice poetry..:))

  • Arisa Kuroki on Jul 16, 2011

    she is my sister!!

  • Uma Shankari on Jul 16, 2011

    Good evocative poem.

  • jalibd on Jul 17, 2011

    interesting post

  • Martin Kloess on Jul 17, 2011

    Very good thank you.

  • Madlmuer on Jul 18, 2011

    What a tremendou$ effort :) you seems to have a great understanding of poetry . A beautiful poetess indeed . . .

  • vietnam on Jul 19, 2011

    very nice think for urself

  • briantaylor1992 on Jul 20, 2011

    Love definitely does cause insomnia, and I’m sure it can lead to much more ;D haha. Good poet.

  • Steven West on Jul 22, 2011

    Very fine poem. Like the imagery.

  • tonyleather on Jul 22, 2011

    enjoyed this

  • CHIPMUNK on Jul 27, 2011

    nice

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