A woman inlove in her boyfriend.

She wanted to share her love

Love that her heart’s longing for

Wishing he could hear what her heart says

Being in love really can’t explain the feelings.

The feeling that she needed someone

Someone that she needed more…

 

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  • Literati on Sep 16, 2009

    A daintlily constructed poem.
    Nice work, once more!
    (:

  • papaleng on Sep 17, 2009

    nice one!

  • rizzei on Sep 20, 2009

    i want to read more of it! but since you cut it short..well, still..thumbs up! :)

  • pusang-kalye on Nov 9, 2009

    naala ko tuloy ang movie na Milan–mahal mo ba ko kaya kailangan mo ko o kailangan mo ko o kailangan mo ko kaya mahal mo ko?

    hirap sagutin no? love is really a complicated matter…

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