Inner Voice(haiku)

avissado on Feb 2, 2012

Tags: ear, Haiku, inner voice, Noise, whisper

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Haiku – Japanese poetry form with 17 syllables(5-7-5).

Whisper in my ear,

Can answer all the questions-

The noise outside blurs it all.

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Comments (18)

avissado on Feb 2, 2012
comments please! Dying to hear what you have to say..thank you
Eunike on Feb 2, 2012
Very good
Safa on Feb 2, 2012
the picture says it all.
mdrkarim7 on Feb 3, 2012
You are a naughty guy..
Nidhi Rai on Feb 3, 2012
Very nice share.
indianwriting on Feb 3, 2012
good one…and such a cute picture..must writ more haiku’s
bagus69 on Feb 3, 2012
Very nice share.
Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 3, 2012
cuz that individual is deaf I guess.
aheed411 on Feb 3, 2012
I like this
Vinaya says good bye on Feb 3, 2012
wow
Tulan on Feb 3, 2012
very good.
Martin Kloess on Feb 3, 2012
interesting.
erwinkennythomas on Feb 3, 2012
amazing
fionna on Feb 4, 2012
It’s amazing – the perfection doesn\’t need many words.
lauralu on Feb 11, 2012
nice
Nidhi Rai on Feb 14, 2012
Interesting.
Tiki33 on Apr 30, 2012
Another great share!
bryan21764 on May 7, 2012
Very nice. Short and sweet.

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http://authspot.com/short-stories/you-are-not-alone-life-as-you-know-it-will-change/

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