I think I’m shallow because I love a pretty girl but to win her heart is when my shallowness turns into utter stupidity. Inside Looking Out… girls are shallow too but they don’t even bother to look inside, one look at my face and they don’t even bother.

Outside looking, skin
The touch, the feel
Want

Something mine
Curves and lines
To find
I’m not blind

Outside looking, sin
In the darkness is the light
Lust

The circle two
Me and you
It’s true
Do you want to?

Outside looking, when
I fall
Lost

In confusion
Delusion
Exclusion
You’re my conclusion

Outside looking, fin
As in doomed
Gladness

Not happiness
Nor sadness
Get past this
For love is madness

Outside looking, in
To you
Shy

Because I know
I love you so
But you won’t
You don’t

Yet

Inside looking out

Copyright © 2011, Will A. Bradford Jr. All rights reserved.

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  • ragnarok1992 on Dec 11, 2011

    Nice poem, most men can relate to you here after all the percentage of men for whom girls will fall immediately is quiet low.

  • ittech on Dec 14, 2011

    thanks for informative post

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