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Inside The Tube

bigpapadan on Jan 6, 2011
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Bobbing in the clear blue.

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Warm, salty water

the adrenaline thumping

the board moves, nose lifting

goofy footing as you stand

cutting into the blue wall

as the tube starts to close.

Escape into the sun

heart pounding as you

race toward the beach

summer, Oahu, Pipeline

Mahalo Bruddah!

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 6, 2011

    very nice

    the three poems u will read today
    are the ones
    i wrote two years ago
    when none read me
    over here in Triond.

    So it makes a difference
    in as I always say
    WHAT’S IN A NAME

    EVERYTHING IS ONES NAME
    the VIBRATIONS ,
    ITS TUNING OF THE HEART,
    AS ONES HARP,
    A melodious VIBRATION OF VOICE
    OF LOVE ,
    OF EMOTION
    And ABOVE ALL
    OF asic HUMAN UNDERSTANDING.

    TO MY MIND THAT’S ALL WHAT POETRY ,
    IN ITS PROSAIC
    OR ANY MODERN MANIFESTATION
    IS ALL ABOUT .

    SORRY FOR the unintended higher case
    as i see and type my
    regrets if it has hurt.

  • bigpapadan on Jan 6, 2011

    Not to worry my friend, I hit the caps lock on mine all the time.

  • lxdollarsxl on Jan 6, 2011

    can feel the waves – unfortunately i would be swept off

  • lowellhenderson on Jan 6, 2011

    One of these days…

  • PSingh1990 on Jan 6, 2011

    Nice Share

    :-)

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jan 7, 2011

    Lovely piece.

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