Insomnia(haiku)

avissado on Feb 7, 2012

Tags: Haiku, insomnia, Japanese, poem, sleep

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Haiku – Japanese poetry form with 17 syllables(5-7-5)

Light goes into dark

Even day takes a break at night-

Only I don’t sleep

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Comments (15)

Nidhi Rai on Feb 7, 2012
Very good.
Dora77 on Feb 7, 2012
superb! avissado.
KimberlyMartin on Feb 7, 2012
I love your Haiku! Very inspiring.
aheed411 on Feb 7, 2012
Good
Safa on Feb 7, 2012
Nice
Vinaya says good bye on Feb 7, 2012
Beautifully done.
Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 7, 2012
And my loneliness gives me company when I can’t sleep:)
Martin Kloess on Feb 7, 2012
GREAT! keep going.
vickylass on Feb 7, 2012
Good one, avissado! I hope to contribute with your next 300 views at 1 Cent! Thanks for sharing!
stryka1966 on Feb 7, 2012
Good one !
erwinkennythomas on Feb 7, 2012
striking
mdrkarim7 on Feb 8, 2012
Interesting to read.
Dora77 on Feb 9, 2012
ilike it!
Sharon L. West on Feb 10, 2012
I like this! Straight to the point and effective to reflect in your own life. Good job!
Melody SJAL on Mar 26, 2012
Nicely written.

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