A Cliff-Hanger falls off the mountain.

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Climbing the cliff

was suppose to be fun,

he felt stiff,

arms ached, heart pounding loud,

no fan-fare, no crowd,

the rope snapped,

his mind clapped,

his emotions trapped,

he screamed,

his sanity streamed,

and he wished it were all a dream,

as his voice tailed off,

rapid blinking and a dry cough,

the sky looked vaguely familiar,

and thinking about it will not last,

intensity building,

and the ground was coming fast.

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Comments (8)
  • GoGreen on May 5, 2009

    this was very well written!!!!

  • Natalie on May 5, 2009

    this was good so full of intensity

  • Feliz33 on May 5, 2009

    wow saw this ad on and wasn’t going to click but im glad i did I love this poetry

  • Evelyn M Carter on May 6, 2009

    Wow! I really enjoyed this read. Very nice putting together of words about something I wouldn’t even think about. Very nice. Thanks for the share.

  • Oxford88 on May 6, 2009

    this was intense my friend

  • Kress on May 7, 2009

    powerfully done

  • Pete Laforest on May 7, 2009

    wow

  • Bagglady on May 13, 2009

    this was intense

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