True amazement for another and what they do for you and how they cause you to feel, getting caught in their web.

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Such a wondrous physiche

I see before me.

What true masculinity.

A vision unto my eyes

that nothing could disguise.

A beauty outspoken,

a will unbroken.

With each and every thought

I feel desire.

My heart has been summonsed and caught.

Entangled in your sensual web

is what I have eagerly sought.

I have acted out the motions and emotions

of how I want to be owned by you,

and taken over and controlled by you.

When you dominate my body

so perfectly with yours,

the ocean inside stirs.

Aligned and in-sync with mine,

the entirety of your massive, manly form

becomes intertwined like a climbing vine,

wrapped so tightly that nothing can separate

its clingy hold.

The actions are profoundly intimate and bold

and more than able

to handle the load.

I must love you to the corners of the earth

and show you the girth

of what my love is worth.

A sweetening flavor

has been dipped

into my needy soul.

Completely intertwined and stirred,

the sustenance in which

you have shared with my body

has made me whole.

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  • kimberk on Feb 9, 2010

    great work

  • Michael Eboh on Feb 9, 2010

    Excellent!

  • VTech on Feb 9, 2010

    Nice Post , Thanks For Sharing.

  • chellsy on Feb 9, 2010

    good job..love it!

  • chellsy on Feb 9, 2010

    good job.love it!

  • jimbob1 on Feb 9, 2010

    DB…sounds like a deep acknowledgement of pleasures sought and pleasures fulfilled. Interesting how you intertwined and stirred sensual feelings in this wonderful write. I Like It and voted to record my response. Thanks for taking the time to write and share this wonderful work of a great wordsmith.

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  • AlmaG on Feb 10, 2010

    Lovely poem :)

  • Oversoul on Feb 10, 2010

    This poem nearly made me melt like chocolate in heat..lol…very beautiful poem…you never cease to amaze me

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Feb 19, 2010

    ….or me

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