Moments pass.

A second, one minute
An hour, an entire day
All moments that 
Make up our lives
A second, one minute
An hour, an entire day
All moments that can
Take our lives away
But it is what the moments make
That becomes important
And those moments  for us
Await

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  • mdegenhardt on Oct 2, 2008

    Ooh, I like this very much! It is truly deep and reflective making the reader question their time and what good is to come their way. Great effect. Michael

  • Will Gray on Oct 2, 2008

    Oh so true. Very good and thought provoking.

  • goodselfme on Oct 2, 2008

    So deep with emotion in a beautiful poem.

  • Liane Schmidt on Oct 2, 2008

    This is fabulous! Especially these lines:

    But it is what the moments make
    That becomes important
    And those moments for us
    Await

    Keep up the skillfully strong, yet geniusly subtle inspirational pieces!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • jo oliver on Oct 2, 2008

    So simple, yet very deep and full of meaning. I love how you expressed such a big thought, with such few words.

  • Lindalulu on Oct 2, 2008

    I loved it!

  • Randy Nephi Homer on Oct 13, 2008

    Deep! I Like.

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Oct 27, 2008

    Wonderful and deep.

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