Intimate and Passionate Lovers

Darla Cooke on Jun 26, 2009

Tags: Everlasting, Forevermore, friends, intimate, love, lovers, passionate, romance

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No longer just friends.

I ache to hold you close at night.

You leave me breathless and wanting more.

It is obvious that we are compatible.

You ignite the flames of my desire.

Our love is true and everlasting.

We will be together forevermore.

You have given me much happiness.

We are no longer just friends,

but intimate and passionate lovers.

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Comments (10)

ken bultman on Jun 26, 2009
Poetry to capture and hold ones interest. Well written.
Hollywood James on Jun 26, 2009
Darla,

I like it!!! Very…very nice!!!
kate smedley on Jun 26, 2009
Wow, passionate poem!
HeyZel on Jun 26, 2009
Very nice and deep
rajeev bhargava on Jun 26, 2009
another wow. this is a really well written and passionate poem. i liked it very much.
StumbleUponWriter on Jun 26, 2009
One word; SUPERB!…right emotions injected.. awesome..:)
Lesanndra on Jun 27, 2009
very touching poem , Darla.
rizzei on Jun 27, 2009
yeah this is really intimate:)
STEVE666 on Jun 29, 2009
Very hot, Darla!
alc on Jun 29, 2009
yes, I love this poem. you captured the words perfectly!!

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