The eternal story of immortal lovers created to love one another through time.

I came into this world

I didn’t know where I was

My mind wasn’t clear, I was lost in a swirl

Home was miles and miles above.

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Colors of green and red

The landscape was so far ahead

The sounds of nature filled my head

And I knew the answers were waiting for me instead

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I traveled under the tallest trees

Sunbeams danced and gleamed

I walked for many miles it seems

I found my image flowing in a stream

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I didn’t know where I was at this moment

The smell of flowers filled the air

I’ve seen so many new things, so sudden

I followed them down the path as the wind pulled back my hair

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I came to this place decorated with style and taste

I found a town full of people wishing and singing

I saw her, a Lilith, pretty and mild, moving with such grace

I heard their dreams coming from their words left lingering

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She came and took my waiting hands

Her eyes were dark pools, but sparkling like a diamond ring

To the valley of the sands

She said she had been waiting for me to sing

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She came into this world for me

She brushed away my tears and she was glad

She said she had been waiting to see

Baby, don’t be sad

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I smile and realized

This was meant to be

She had the power to hold me tantalized

I fell from the sky, don’t you see

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She keeps me close forever, our love would never die

We saw the world of Man return to the sea, nothing was left but an ocean of lost dreams

From where I come from immortals never lie

But the world came back, from tumble and fall, it was created from hope, after all, it seems.

T.S.Garp © Copyright 2009 All Rights Reserved.

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 19, 2009

    as u come into

    i am about to

    out too

  • TheStayAtHome on Nov 19, 2009

    It gave me much food for thought, and i never get that when i read poetry anymore..

    Good read

  • AlmaG on Nov 19, 2009

    Wonderful poem :)

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 19, 2009

    Very good work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • svishnugopal on Nov 19, 2009

    wonderful poem..i loved it

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 20, 2009

    Lovely piece, Steve.

  • Hansika on Nov 21, 2009

    nice one…

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 21, 2009

    good work,

  • lily on Feb 6, 2011

    Great poetry expressed to much feelings for two lovers that love never ending, i love it. It\’s really love, a true love, a truest feelings that i ever had, absolute honest & loyalty, love that never fades & can\’t never change for whatever or what everything in this world. Thanks for sharing, take care always & God bless everyone of us.

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