Intriguing Spell

Darla Cooke on Aug 19, 2009

Tags: cemetery, darkness, evil, graveyard, hunt, monster, prowl, silence, spell, Tombstones

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Scary love poem.

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An eerie silence has fallen over the graveyard,

as I once again fall prey to your intriguing spell.

You always bring out the evil monster in me,

as we kiss among the crumbling tombstones.

I cannot resist the excitement of the hunt,

as we prowl along together in the darkness.

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Comments (11)

Marie Milton on Aug 19, 2009
Nice work : ) Very very intriguing : ))
Ramalingam on Aug 19, 2009
The eerie silence itself arouse and sustain my interest in the poem.A nice beginning to a poem that ends nicely.Thanks for sharing.
Nikita K on Aug 19, 2009
The passion is so tactile but in such a sinister way and I love the imagery of “crumbling tombstones”. You write very simple poems but some of the imagery you use is just so appealing o the senses! Great job, Darla!
Goodselfme on Aug 19, 2009
Another well done poem with a great flow. TX
emmahaynes on Aug 19, 2009
Very well worded, a great piece
STEVE666 on Aug 19, 2009
One of these days Darla, there\\\’s gonna be no returning for you from that graveyard!
kathie107 on Aug 19, 2009
Interesting, well done, have my like
Yvonne K on Aug 19, 2009
You make that graveyard allurng.
Tanya Wallace on Aug 19, 2009
Very imaginative and creative.Great write Darla!
Milton H Peebles III on Aug 19, 2009
nice
Collette Edwards on Aug 20, 2009
prawling for ghost? great poem

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