I will celebrate my 47th birthday on Wednesday, June 9th. I’ve also just celebrated (on June 3rd) one year on Triond. So I am looking back once again and taking a closer look at what I have accomplished thus far but, more importantly, what I have yet to do.

Looking back over years gone by

Thinking of all I hoped and planned

Back then nothing seemed out of reach

Has it all slipped through my hand?

Or is there yet time to do it all

To have my claim to fame

To make my mark in history

So all will know my name

Do I even want that anymore?

The praise and accolades

From people whom I’ve never met

No, that kind of glory fades

But if I inspire those near to me

To strive and reach their goal

And instruct them, “Each one, teach one”

I will have played a better role

What young people are watching me

And trying to discern

If I’ve  truly learned the lessons

That I’m asking them to learn

Or am I merely pushing them

To pursue what I will not

Because I think I’m past my prime

And lack the zeal they’ve got

What I’ve lost in youthful energy

I’ve gained in wisdom and grace

So I can still get to the finish line

Just at a slower pace

And if my steps should falter

I would hope that those I’ve taught

Would bear me on their shoulders

For the good fight that I’ve fought

 

©2010 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • ronthoughts on Jun 7, 2010

    Happy Birthday! Wishing all the best for everything.
    More power!!!
    Liked!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 7, 2010

    What a wonderful outlook but you have time to do anything you choose. You are in your prime. Loved the poem.

  • TwiKnight on Jun 8, 2010

    You’re only as young as you think and act. Aging gracefully is the way. Loved the poem too. Cheers, mate!

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 8, 2010

    Happy birthday my friend, you look far younger than 47, guess some years are hidden somewhere by exercise.

  • ashan1614 on Jun 8, 2010

    AGONY AUNT: I accredit it to “good genes”. The women in my family have all aged well. :)

  • Sourav on Jun 8, 2010

    Happy Birthday Andrea! Keep writing your wonderful poems!

  • Olive B. on Jun 12, 2010

    Happy Birthday! Remember age is just a number…and if I can quote from one of my favorite movies, \”It\’s not the years, it\’s the mileage.\” Great poem.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jul 1, 2010

    happy birthday

    BELATED MAY BE

    I FORGOT AS I WAS

    IN THE AC

  • diamondpoet on Jul 14, 2010

    even though life is not always great I would never allow myself to draw up and die, there are so many things and wonderful people to inspire us. We can all learn from each other and even though I am old I feel that my youth will resurface. Great write.

  • 1hopefulman on Jul 22, 2010

    Very inspiring! Keep on fighting!

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