Is a dark day, no shadows, all black, is truly a dark day.

is a dark day, no shadows, all black, is truly a dark day.
Is it an eclipse?, Is it at night?, am I a thousand feet underground?
is a dark day, no shadows, all black, is truly a dark day.
Do I have a blindfold on?, do I have my eyes closed? , Is turned off the moon?
is a dark day, no shadows, all black, is truly a dark day.
Am I blind?, are my eyes dry? Have I lost my eyes?
It is a sad day. All alone, all black, is truly a dark day.

is a dark day, my hands are empty, I feel a deep void

no shadows, no light, no contrast, dark solitude

all black, a bottomless pit before me, the deepest darkness

is a dark day, no shadows, all black, is truly a dark day.

is a dark day, no shadows, all black, is truly a dark day.
Is it an eclipse?, Is it at night?, am I a thousand feet underground?
is a dark day, no shadows, all black, is truly a dark day.
Do I have a blindfold on?, do I have my eyes closed? , Is turned off the moon?
is a dark day, no shadows, all black, is truly a dark day.
Am I blind?, are my eyes dry? Have I lost my eyes?
It is a sad day. All alone, all black, is truly a dark day.

is a dark day, loneliness…

no shadows, sadness…

all black, sorrow and desolation…

is a dark day, no shadows, all black, is truly a dark day.

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  • Dreamy777 on May 2, 2011

    great one

  • CHIPMUNK on May 2, 2011

    really is a dark day thanks for a wonderful share liked it

  • megamatt09 on May 2, 2011

    Very good work.

  • foxpete88 on May 2, 2011

    great work…thanks.-

  • Peace Poet on May 3, 2011

    This is an excellent poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • shakugan123 on May 4, 2011

    how dark is dark?
    how black is black?
    what a pretty shock
    to be engulf in endless dark
    go on take a walk
    maybe you can find a spark
    to drive away the gloomy dark

  • mona rastogi on May 23, 2011

    good sharing

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