Try stating the poem–see what the effects are! I did! And A poem derives instead of mere question solicting emotions–do you know what I mean. There is plenty of material there to create a beautiful poem–that is what writing is all about–creating–looking over–editing–re-writing–nothing is ever perfect–though finished–something more can always be done–and most of the time–need to be done–even with the best of them–keep up the good work–admire your willingness and effort a great deal! thanks for being my writing friend! Cool!

Nice poem=)

wow great pic and a beautiful poem.

I love it! Simple put full of impact.

well done…i like your writings…they are very well written
Keep sharing

Nice write

Very beautiful*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

Beautifully expressed with much feeling.

Beautiful, simple and to the point. This is a question we often ask ourselves. Well done.

Christine

I love poems like this with the simple structure and the repetition of phrases to reinforce your message. I’ve read it about five times now, outstanding poem.

Great verse

very well done…Plus, good combination of words.
I like it very much.

Keep sharing.

very nice,

Lovely piece. Nice work.

i liked this, i like the momentum and its structure. thanks for sharing, keep up the good work!

Deep with emotions, simple and to the point. I love it.

Well done!!..very nice poem..simple but very attractive..touching too..Thanx for sharing this wonderful piece.

nicely written..yes your heart is truly beating..having these thoughts written in that very nice way:)

So beautiful!

This Poem is simple yet filling…in the sense it gets the job done and it, it leaves the reader a chance to feel the poem in there own way. I enjoyed reading this and i look forward to more of you work.

Simply well done.

I like your style: one question after another. I really like it.