Is She an Angel

Debra. on Oct 12, 2009

Tags: angel, desires, divine, heartbeat, vision

Angel or ghost?

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Upon the hour of midnight

Moonlight, all aglow, cascading

Between the darkened corners

There stood before me, an apparition,

Of solid beauty, in timeless form

Like a billowing mist,

She rises, gracefully, elegantly

Is she an angel?

Enchanting tune plays passionately

Of a beauty, so rare

From far across, and yet, so close

She moves towards me, as if, by wings

Unseen, flapping, effortlessly

Like sand through an hourglass

Is she an angel?

Enthralled by her mere sight

Speechless, I am rendered

Her lips quiver, slightly, ah

The seduction of her eyes, unbroken

Earth shattering, mesmerizing

Sends shutters through my soul

Is she an angel?

This divine vision of loveliness

Captivated, I move as if,

In a space without time

The sound of my own heart beats madly

Like that of an age-old rhythmic drumbeat

Is she an angel?

This vision of loveliness,

That seduces me with such ease

Navigating my every thought

And desires upon her

Is she an angel?

I wonder

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Goodselfme on Oct 12, 2009
Nicely flowing piece of prose. TX
fragile18 on Oct 13, 2009
lovely poem
stryka66 on Oct 13, 2009
“Beguiling” words, Deb – an excellent write – left me utterly intrigued…..
cutedrishti8 on Oct 13, 2009
great piece of write…
Butterfly Musings on Oct 13, 2009
very nice imagery, whispy like the wind blowing in spurts and flows, great job
Morgana on Oct 13, 2009
Maybe she is This poem feels very serene, delicate, like a angel, you chose the right tone Lovely read.
Bo Russo on Oct 13, 2009
I vote yes she must be an angel.
Christine Ramsay on Oct 13, 2009
I think she must be an angel. This is such an ethereal and beautiful piece. Well done.

Christine
Patrick Bernauw on Oct 13, 2009
Wonderful poem… what a flow!… and then the repeated questioning “Is she an angel”… and the answer at the very end…
ken bultman on Oct 13, 2009
Let’s eliminate the ghost so it must have been an angel. What a beautiful manner in which to describe your experience.
ashan1614 on Oct 13, 2009
The imagery here is amazing. I’m sure she is an angel.
deep blue on Oct 13, 2009
A perplexing sight before your eyes well crafted in poetic lines. We all get the chance to face life’s wonders at times. Nice poem, Debra.
Katie Marie on Oct 13, 2009
Loved the movement of this and the ongoing question underlying the vision before the eyes.
giftarist on Oct 13, 2009
Great imagery.. I like this — very well composed!
xoxo on Oct 13, 2009
Definitely an angel. You’ve described her pretty well. Love each lines Debbie.
Juancav on Oct 13, 2009
Position seductive ethereal.I believe in Angel.
Will Gray on Oct 13, 2009
Great write. I say she is an angel.
CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 13, 2009
Beautifully written poem! Thanks for sharing!
Tlchimes on Oct 13, 2009
Very good.
Poetic Enigma on Oct 13, 2009
I also think angel, this is a beautiful poem….flowing so wonderfully!
Sourav on Oct 13, 2009
Beautiful write. It’s good to see a good poem in this site!
Vikram Chhabra on Oct 13, 2009
Wow! That left me speechless. It took me into your own heavenly experience!!
Tanya Wallace on Oct 13, 2009
Beautifully written poem.Wonderful imagery, using some fabulous poetic words!
Shawn O on Oct 13, 2009
Great poem and beautifully written. She must be an angel.
papaleng on Oct 14, 2009
Wonderful, got stuck on my chair while reading.
STEVE666 on Oct 14, 2009
Beautiful verses, Debra.
Elizabeth Abbott on Oct 15, 2009
i think maybe that angel is you. So very enchanting. Thank you for sharing.
Mary S Taylor Bithell on Oct 15, 2009
Lovely image posted and beautiful words put together! Happy writing… you truely have a gift! Thank you for sharing.
Mr Ghaz on Oct 15, 2009
Absolutely wonderful!..cheers..so creative..I LOVED it! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem
revivor on Oct 16, 2009
you wonder – we all wonder now??!
Jane Jane on Oct 17, 2009
seems like an angel.=)
hallofwords on Oct 17, 2009
Definitely an agel.
hallofwords on Oct 17, 2009
Definitely an angel.
XXElleXX on Oct 19, 2009
Debra Mann..exquisite wings are the very part of your spirit that lifts you and allows you to go places you never thought possible..wings allow you to go to that place within your heart that makes all your wildest dreams come true
XXElleXX on Oct 19, 2009
Sorry..there was supposed to be a full-stop after exquisite..hehehe.
T.Rex McGoogle on Oct 21, 2009
Very beautiful metaphors in this poem. It’s probably an angel
because there’s a goodness in you that deserves such company.
Olivia Reason on Oct 22, 2009
Lovely imagery.
Faith Hodge on Nov 8, 2009
I very well know this poem. More beautiful this time! Thank you!
Phill Senters on Nov 12, 2009
She must be an angel.
Moses Ingram on Dec 8, 2009
I think she has to be an angel.Another good read.
S A JOHNSON on Dec 12, 2009
Beautiful
Sexyhood03 on Dec 15, 2009
Simply amazing as well as the picture perfect is that your picture
Educate And Learn on Dec 18, 2009
A poem which kept you interested till the end.
V rank on Dec 26, 2009
I was really wondering who she really is… great…
thuanynguyen on Dec 29, 2009
Great poem!
DericLocklear on Dec 30, 2009
Very nice job Dear
magicdarts on Dec 30, 2009
uplifting – I believe in angels!
Pablina on Jan 2, 2010
Beautiful writing.
Melinda McQueen on Jan 2, 2010
Nice poem. I added you to my list. Please add me too.
Mila Marcos on Jan 8, 2010
My brother loves poetry – God help you Debra if he reads yours LMAO – don’t worry, I won’t tell him:)
Chris Stonecipher on Jan 25, 2010
Hi Deb,
I chose to see it as an angel. This is a beautiful write!
Blessings,
Chris
oldster on Feb 10, 2010
Lovely poem Debra. Could be Spirit teasing you.
Should that be ’shudders’ through your soul?
xoxo on Apr 7, 2010
This is one of my favorite of yours. Read it again and liked it, Debbie
Melody SJAL on Apr 17, 2010
Your lines really mesmerize, Deb. I love reading the word “moonlight” in every piece – you see, it’s my official nickname, but now only my relatives and childhoold friends call me that name.
Inna Tysoe on Aug 27, 2010
Thanks for that.

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