It All Started (Haiku)

Angelji on Jan 31, 2012

Tags: care, faith, hello, love, starts, trust

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Love don’t just begets smile and laughter it also yields pain and tears, where tears tells all the things that the heart can’t utter.

Love starts with hello

Strengthen with trust, faith and care ,

Ends in loneliest tears.

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Comments (10)

avissado on Jan 31, 2012
nice and like the way you’ve chosen the picture to go with it!
Saurav Banerjee on Jan 31, 2012
Lovely depiction.
LoveDoctor on Jan 31, 2012
Very beautiful, but always remember that if a guy makes you cry, he’s not worth it. The best thing to do is to move on. No man is worth crying over.
Vinaya says good bye on Jan 31, 2012
Very true
Audrey Howitt on Jan 31, 2012
Sad write!
Audrey Howitt on Jan 31, 2012
Sad write!
JamesForrester on Jan 31, 2012
cool pic but depressing love story, find someone that appreciates you for you… I actually agree with you, but we need to move past the tears and find more people to give our love too… I am also hopeless romantic, so I get it.
erwinkennythomas on Jan 31, 2012
touching
Nidhi Rai on Feb 1, 2012
So true.
girishpuri on Feb 1, 2012
fantastic

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