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It Could be True

lxdollarsxl on Jan 20, 2011
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How do you describe?

Desert landscapes brutal simplicity

Bowing not to the will of man

Untameable for all the sands of time

Beautiful and unforgiving

Equated to woman

　

　

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  • The Quail 1957 on Jan 20, 2011

    Great poem/Hiaku!

  • Cracked Gamer on Jan 20, 2011

    great poem

  • Larry Fish on Jan 20, 2011

    Interesting read.

  • GameLive on Jan 20, 2011

    good 1

  • Michal Dorcak on Jan 21, 2011

    Good poem. Interesting idea to compare desert to a woman.

  • o0o_silver_suzie_o0o on Jan 21, 2011

    woman = desert = both dry and barren?
    woman = desert = beautiful colour and form ?

  • lxdollarsxl on Jan 21, 2011

    not the first one suzie, the second is more apt

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