About the effects of experiencing the "shameful" sin first hand. Everyone is faced with this feeling at one point in their life.

Everyone had experienced that feeling

Even though most of us will refuse to admit

From the other eyes the feeling may show

The more that you hide it the clearer it all is

With all this there can only be one outcome

Difficult to fix when you can’t help but care

Makes you feel shameful and guilty as charged

 The more that you fight it the more that it’s there

The many reasons that can cause such jealousy

This could also turn bad to worse at any time

So many others out there get sucked in so fast

They were just too late to read all of the signs

 Sometimes these things can get so damn ugly

And can simply end up spiralling out of control

The more you fail to find a solution for this

Contemplating more than you’ve ever before

Sometimes in our life close friends are lost

Due to the wrong actions that we chose to take

In reality your friendship may never be mended

Simply because it may just be too little too late

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  • jeyraul on Sep 28, 2011

    cool post. You can check out more about counselling.

  • BlueAngel on Sep 29, 2011

    thank you but what do you mean check out more about ‘counselling?’

  • krrymarie on Oct 3, 2011

    Jealousy is a very horrible and nasty thing and can make people do some rather stupid things.

  • erwinkennythomas on Nov 29, 2011

    it’s natural to many but bad!

  • tonyleather on Dec 2, 2011

    I like your thinking.

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 26, 2011

    Being too jealous is an awful quality, you cant be happy for good things to happen to other people because you are to envious.

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