A patient’s will to live, against everything. His way!

It Is My Life, Right ?
Stubborn magnet for sympathy
Transpersonally seeking empathy
To lose control by being forced,
Not in this patient’s destiny!

 

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  • Oliver on Jun 29, 2008

    Stubborn patient those older ones, seasoned with a frame of mind that says, “oh bytes meee” hee hee. Glad to hear dad is doing much better. Hope to not see you around the hospital anytime soon babe !
    hugs

  • Samantha on Jun 29, 2008

    Great poem on determination and having control over ones life and don’t you think its about time when they get past 60 to just let them decide already !

    Caught up to you so have a great day.

  • Mom on Jul 12, 2008

    william said: . . to dye, to sleepe
    No more; and by a sleepe, to say we end
    The Heart-ake, and the thousand Naturall shockes
    That Flesh is heyre too? \’Tis a consummation
    Deuoutly to be wish\’d. To dye to sleepe,
    To sleepe, perchance to Dreame

  • Mom on Jul 12, 2008

    incidently, your rating
    I LIKED IT
    is not working despite 4 or 5 tries . .

    why is that?

  • Westbrook on Dec 30, 2008

    You should write more. This is a very interesting poem. I can relate to it because both my mom and dad have passed away.

  • Enlightenedpsych2 on Jan 31, 2009

    Thank you Westbrook . . . since i found you guys and gals again since the computer crash last year, I am ready to deliver more interesting fodder for the literary cannons to go off !
    sharing the light,

  • Leonardo davinci Evans on Aug 23, 2009

    Millions have died so that you may have that life.

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