A poem about cutting a sandwich the right way and eating it while watching a show about Hunter S. Thompson, for a couple of minutes, before moving some bales of hay.

 

Spooning hummus on wheat bread

laying on a floral plate.

Should it be left,

left alone,

cut down the middle,

or sideways,

my knife awaits.

Am I being too careful?

Am I just too careless?

Why should the cut matter so much?

Should I even bother to make it?

This cut could mean a better meal.

This cut could mean a better life.

This lunch has to be quick,

I have two bales of hay to move.

I cut sideways,

sit down in front of the television,

watch a show about Mr. Thompson.

This sideways cut may have saved me

from Mr. Thompson’s fate.

It made me feel happy,

if only for another day.

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  • Alistair Briggs on Mar 4, 2010

    As long as it tasted good!

  • I Have Had Enough on Mar 4, 2010

    Who writes poems about cutting sandwiches, really? I bet there is some conspiracy at play here.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Mar 4, 2010

    I think and, um well, hope that it is a global one.

  • Brenda Nelson on Mar 4, 2010

    Its just a cut of a sandwich.. its the moving of the hay that is really important.

  • martie on Mar 5, 2010

    Perhaps the poem should have been called procrastination. It kept you from moving that hay for a few minutes longer.

    Cute poem.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Mar 5, 2010

    lol. Almost anything is better than being a Hunter S. Thompson. :)

  • monica55 on Mar 5, 2010

    This is a clever idea: The protagonist would rather eat than work. He plays with the food and build up his appetite- Then he feeds his savored palate and waste himself. Nice work.
    Monica.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Mar 5, 2010

    Before I had this sandwich I was a bit depressed, making it, cutting the sandwich sideways, and watching a show about a guy that fell victim to his own depression while eating it, actually made me refocus into realizing that the little things in life can give us happiness for a moment in time to get past depression. I wish Hunter had cut his sandwich the right way. :)

  • swatilohani on Mar 5, 2010

    excellent

  • ken bultman on Mar 5, 2010

    Who the hell is Mr. Thompson?

  • ken bultman on Mar 5, 2010

    Who is Mr. Thompson?

  • ken bultman on Mar 5, 2010

    Who is Mr.Thompson? Did you move to Canada to avoid the draft?

  • MartineP on Mar 5, 2010

    Nice poem. Now maybe if somebody would be feeding you, you might eat the sandwich while moving the hay. And other helper might have carried along a portable TV to watch the show.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Mar 5, 2010

    Mr Thompson is Hunte S Thompson, a writer who committed suicide.

    If you want to avoid drafts Canada is not the place to move. Especially Alberta, it is often cold and windy here.

    Oh you meant that other kind of draft, Nope I was too young for that draft, I moved to Canada for Love and only that. If it was not for that I would not have moved to Canada, and certianly not Alberta. If I was moving to Canada to move to Canada it would have been to Ontario, to be close to friends and relatives in Michigan, as I grew up 52 miles from Sarnia Ontario, lived there until my mid 40s when I fell in love with a Canadian in Alberta. I miss Michigan very much, but I love my wife more.
    I have never really been a person who is into “countries”. I am more of a globalist and find that countries just seem to get in the way of this world being what it could be.

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 5, 2010

    Very good poem.

  • RS Wing on Mar 5, 2010

    Cool little piece. I am a huge fan of ‘The Champion Of Fun’, Dr. Thompson. Great post.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Mar 5, 2010

    clever idea for a poem

  • edynperu on Mar 6, 2010

    it is a poem

  • deep blue on Mar 7, 2010

    That was an elaborate poetry over a sandwich, Mark.

  • sambhafusia on Mar 7, 2010

    great share..thanks for that

  • BradONeill on Mar 8, 2010

    imagine all the cares of the world that would go away if you made a lasagna! good work my friend.

  • standingproud on Mar 9, 2010

    Dont matter how the bread is cut.
    If I am to eat bread with hummus I would just tear the bread apart.
    oh I love hummus yum .

  • standingproud on Mar 9, 2010

    Hope your feeling better
    ♥smiles♥

  • Ruby Hawk on Mar 9, 2010

    Mark, that’s neat and who is Mr. Thompson?

  • Jo Oliver on Mar 9, 2010

    Funny what can bring inspiration and self examination. Well done.

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 10, 2010

    Lol, I do hope you are feeling better now, Hunter S Thompson was a charismatic and complex figure… I can understand why you wrote this poem after watching the show.

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