It’s when you talk to me about her that it hurts… and the most painful part is still smiling after all that he said.

Talking to you feels like I’m in heaven, only better

It’s like just your words can make me high

But it only hurts when you don’t know

And when you talk of her, deep inside, I sigh.

Trying to keep a smile in pain

A broken heart yet tied by a string

Waiting to be cut someday soon

All the pieces falling, shattering.

You hold the key to my heart

Yet walk away with it without care

Thinking of nothing and giving it to her

I’m remotely afar, away and in need of repair.

It only hurts when you don’t know

What you do and say to me

I can’t care so much who has a place in your heart

This hurts, you know — love me back or set me free.

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Comments (7)
  • jaysonv on Dec 11, 2009

    wow written nicely..so touching.

  • Olive B. on Dec 11, 2009

    u totally stole my line…haha very good…does it have any particular meaning?

  • giftarist on Dec 12, 2009

    A poignant piece, nice one!

  • diamondpoet on Dec 12, 2009

    That was an intense write, good job.

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 12, 2009

    Very wonderful write…

  • Sexyhood03 on Dec 12, 2009

    cool

  • Phoebe Wu on Dec 12, 2009

    OH.MY.GOSH tht is good!!!!!

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