A little ditty, hope you like it.

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Am I awake or am I dreaming?

Sometimes I just can’t tell.

It seems like Heaven when you are here .

When you’re gone it seems like Hell.

So dimly lit my world tonight.

Like a painting left undone.

Then you appear and make it bright

Bringing colors to be spun.

Is this the dream? It seems so real.

I hope that it is true

The deepest love I’ll ever feel.

Is when I’m here with you.

Just stay with me forever

and never leave my side

Then my dreams and reality

Can happily collide.

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  • webseowriters on Sep 25, 2010

    A nice share

  • drelayaraja on Sep 25, 2010

    Lovely dream..

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 25, 2010

    A beautiful poem and so well written.

    Christine

  • Jonie on Oct 5, 2010

    ” Then my dreams and reality
    Can happily collide.”

    Wonderful :-)

  • A.L.Smith on Oct 5, 2010

    Lovely, I really like the line like a painting left undo. Nice!

  • Bo Russo on Oct 23, 2010

    That was pretty nice.

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