It was a great coincidence…

It was a great coincidence, but still, all seemed to be exquisitely coordinated: you stepped off the elevator, I was in front, waiting, I can´t remember what I was waiting for, It was maybe you, maybe I was waiting for that moment. I smiled, you shyly said hello, we were two strangers in a perfect match.

Time froze, heart pounding, I fell in love with your beauty, your eyes were lost in my eyes.

And there was nothing around, it was an epiphany of tomorrow, a special and magical moment.

Fear, anxiety, love, a thousand feelings took over me.

tickle and a lump in my throat, my hands were shaking, I turned a little shy girl.

Your footsteps were firm, your glance was haughty, you looked like a dream come true.

A coincidence, a strange encounter, a moment that lasted an eternity, a day that changed my life.

Everything seemed set for that day, I Remember It Like It Was Yesterday, I wonder if some day I’ll see you again.

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  • UncleSammy on Jan 24, 2011

    nice share

  • Cinders on Jan 24, 2011

    What a lovely, haunting poem. You managed to capture the emotion of that one passing moment. Thank you for sharing.

  • leoforex on Jan 24, 2011

    nice post

  • multiplenews on Jan 25, 2011

    A nice story share.

  • SowmyaT on Jan 25, 2011

    Nice

  • samgoldencoffee on Jan 31, 2011

    i wish you all the best to see the special someone again..
    i had encountered such things..
    i met that someone once.then six years laters, we met again..
    but the sad part was that he was in love with my best friend..
    my first crush with my best friend…

  • samgoldencoffee on Jan 31, 2011

    great post.
    brings back memories…

  • multiplenews on Jan 31, 2011

    Nice story buddy.

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