Comments on: It Was Her Smile

By: Darla Smith

Darla Smith — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 15:31:51 +0000

Lovely poem!

By: Annashank

Annashank — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 12:17:09 +0000

This is beautiful!!!

By: Christine Ramsay

Christine Ramsay — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 07:39:39 +0000

That is such a lovely piece.

Christine

By: Phantom Beauty

Phantom Beauty — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 06:31:04 +0000

Ho Troost-meister! That is such a pretty and good feeling warm poem! It makes me all happy all over…well I have nothing else to say except for good job and keep writing! (But take your time, of course. You are after all, retired)

By: cutedrishti8

cutedrishti8 — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 06:05:08 +0000

Excellent poem…Loved it

By: Valerie Curtiss

Valerie Curtiss — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 03:43:21 +0000

Very sweet

By: Snooky

Snooky — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 00:28:56 +0000

Absolutely Loverly,

By: LOVELY HONEY

LOVELY HONEY — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 00:00:06 +0000

Just excellent your poem

It goes to prove how time flies
Though man cries
He still continues to try
At 50 years of lapse
Let ample love from start relapse

Those times were different
Then men and women were lovers true
Times have since changed
I wish now you knew

Guys go now fish
Be it in a ditch
Or for a new dish
Then they show
What we can’t
Yes fish once again
For sure we all now know.

But your fifty years
My do you say
Not that many minutes
Now any longer than that
Can any one these days stay.

By: Sukhdarshan

Sukhdarshan — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 22:14:35 +0000

this is an excellent poem that respires in the presence of sublime love…thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem..

By: Guy Hogan

Guy Hogan — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 21:52:12 +0000

A lovely poem. The only thing better than young love is long lasting love.