Whenever a girl declines my proposal…………..I ll be happy for that……As she has broken my heart, and out of which a new art pops out.Read the below that follows………….

I can see the smoke,

Rising up, through the chimineys

Of my heart, I can’t poke

Into her heart, further any,

She is the smoke,

I can’t stop her go,

Yet, it is, forest of oak

My heart, trees that’re low

Burn off, giving ashes,

Over these, they grow,

The better oak; clashes

The older ones, they flow,

Her gases out of my heart

Letting talents to pop out-

To fill this cart, my heart,

For its glory to shout.

A broken heart, I would call

A thing that really rocks

It can transform all

The world, life & still rocks.

It rocks, it can’t be ceased

Passing time, burns it up

And calibre is still leased

To fill this endless cup.

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  • mdrkarim7 on Jan 9, 2012

    Sunshine be there after rain!

  • Angelji on Jan 9, 2012

    time will heal all wound just for now we will suffer …till we will be done with it..haha that if we would still be alive after such painful phase .

  • aisha jamal on Jan 9, 2012

    nice

  • erwinkennythomas on Jan 9, 2012

    nicely said

  • ayub75 on Jan 9, 2012

    thanks mdrkarim for your lovely words.

  • ayub75 on Jan 9, 2012

    thanks for your so nice remarks Angelji. well come

  • ayub75 on Jan 9, 2012

    thanks for like it aisha jamal.so nice of you

  • ayub75 on Jan 9, 2012

    thanks erwinkennythomas. you are most well come

  • kirti on Jan 10, 2012

    Nice one

  • kirti on Jan 10, 2012

    Nice one

  • girishpuri on Jan 10, 2012

    ayub well written , keep it up

  • Yvhes P. on Jan 10, 2012

    very nice! thanks for sharing =)

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 10, 2012

    good work.

  • Marcin Kaminski on Jan 10, 2012

    good one!

  • girishpuri on Jan 31, 2012

    very good

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