It’s Been

Kaavs on Jun 28, 2009

Tags: moments, skin, water

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Some moments by.

Some moments have passed me by
I think of this as all the dust would fly.

The sand ripples like water had splashed
Through my hair and into my eyes.

As the sun beats upon my dry skin,
I look up at you and smile, as I always do.

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Comments (6)

Darla Cooke on Jun 28, 2009
Lovely poem.
Mr Ghaz on Jun 28, 2009
Great post!!..this is really nice and beautiful poem..sweet words too..I LIKED it..Thanks for sharing.
George W Whitehead on Jun 29, 2009
Lovely poem.
DeanDee on Jun 29, 2009
moments to enjoy I love it.
observant one on Jun 29, 2009
like this poem very much,talent shines through you.
richard reed on Jun 29, 2009
beautiful,and eclectic,precious and moving,,stay blessed my friend,,your fan for life..Rich

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