It’s Better Cold

ViolettaAlexis on Feb 17, 2011

A poem based upon disgusting mental disorders and psychosis.

It’s Better Cold

Mary stands below the stairs
Daddy stands, but not right there
Shall she come up, if she dares
Mommy’s blood spilled everywhere

Mary stands below the stairs
Daddy wouldn’t touch a hair
A skeptic promise, but he swears
He would never touch a hair

Mary stands below the stairs
In pieces yet she can’t compare
The pieces of her brother, there
In the crib, cut in squares

Mary stands below the stairs
Where her judgement is impaired
But she climbs because she cares
Mary climbs up the stairs

Mary climbed up the stairs
Scent of blood is in the air
Chopped up baby, no repair
Mommy in the bathtub, there

Mary stands above the stairs
Here comes Daddy ’cause he cares
Blood cascades from a blare
Mary goes ’round the stairs

Mary lies below the stairs
Daddy lies above her, there
Mary’s skin is what she wears
Daddy loves her cold and bare

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Comments (4)

Allison Jae on Mar 11, 2011
Very disturbing and frightening poem.
Ubel Ein on Mar 11, 2011
Absolutely amazing.
LewSethics on Mar 12, 2011
Strange subject matter, weird lyrical verses.
I like it but I wont read it again, its that kind of poem.
Good write.
Aardaerimus on Apr 8, 2011
Dark. Tragic. Twisted.

Not really my thing, but you’re damn good at what you do. Great writing and wicked imagery. Very well done.

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