Wishing that I could end it all…

    Is there anything real?
    Is this all a dream?
    Are we just some Fantasy,
 living in a land of make believe?
    This must be some sick Joke,
 A crazy version of Twilight Zone.
    I’m bouncing off the Wall’s,
 Wishing that I could end it all.
    Never to deal with the Demon’s in my Mind.
    Or the Hell that seems to find me.
    No matter where I go,
 I know that it will surely follow.
    It’s got to be a dream.

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Comments (7)
  • Darla Smith on Feb 1, 2009

    Very emotionally expressed.

  • Bren Parks on Apr 18, 2009

    Said in a very moving way……very well done!

  • Nayef1 on Apr 18, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • F J McCarthy on Apr 18, 2009

    This was a very rough one to read for I have felt this way. Things do get better,I know.Very good poem, thank you for sharing this.

  • kate smedley on Apr 19, 2009

    Very raw Carrie, very well written too. I hope you are feeling better now.

  • clovis mackintosh on Apr 19, 2009

    I found this poem to be really very thought provoking like some profound but only half remembered dream.

  • OhSugar on May 12, 2009

    A very haunting poem. The emoitions are very raw and filled with despear of life. Life can be beautiful.

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