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Sucks that you’re mean,
Sucks that you hate,
Sucks that you can’t,
Seem to think as of late,
Maybe they hate you,
Maybe they care,
Maybe they just want you out of their hair,
Can’t it be breaking,
The ties that we’ve made,
Trying to hard,
At the games that you played,
Nothing too quick,
Yet ever too fast,
This then will click,
That nothing can last.
I like this. Poetry seems to come naturally to you, just as it does to me. Keep writing, and don’t ever give that up. Poetry is a beautiful thing, and it’s a very creative way to express emotions, whatever they may be. Anyway, I do truly like this, and unlike a lot of people that lave feedback on my poems, I actually read the poem I’m commenting on. As I always do. I’ll “like” it too 
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