A cruise to nowhere makes gamblers feel despondent but some say that it was only for fun while others think it would make them feel better if they had won.

It’s a cruise to nowhere

Time again to try their luck

- – -

Gamblers board a ship

That pushes out to sea

So that they could

Go through

Their monthly ritual

- – -

“Being away from the shore

Is quite a chore”

Some say 

They’ll do it no more

Image via Wikipedia

Image via Wikipedia

Image via Wikipedia

 - – -

It’s that time

For my friends to sit

Before the slots

And cast their lots

- – -

They hope to win

For it has been

A long time coming

Though some thought it

To be a sin

- – -

Nevertheless

It’s the same old story

“It was mainly for fun,”

Some grumble

Fumbling their luggage

With disappointment

As they disembarked

- – -

Others console themselves

Saying

“It would have been nice

If we ourselves had won”

- – -

Why does it seem like

The same old story

Over and over again

While playing in vain?

- – - 

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Comments (14)
  • pruelpo on Nov 27, 2011

    This is already a pattern – even in politics the pattern is drastically adapted.

  • pattiann on Nov 27, 2011

    Excellent as usual. I figured out something about you…. you do NOT know how to write a bad poem.
    Once the lottery in my state was the highest it has ever been. My sister and her husband made me buy a ticket. I bought one ticket for a dollar and I lost and my sister, about 18 years later still will not give me back the dollar I spent. She says it has been too long and the law says it is too many days since the situation happened that she is not required to give me the money =)

  • megamatt09 on Nov 27, 2011

    Very good

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 27, 2011

    great post but the coin image made me so happy cuz I have hobby of collecting coins:)

  • Rosettaartist1 on Nov 27, 2011

    very good

  • straw1979 on Nov 27, 2011

    very great poem

  • PR Mace on Nov 27, 2011

    Excellent work.

  • Saurav Banerjee on Nov 28, 2011

    Good one!

  • CarolineMG on Nov 28, 2011

    great one,,
    i don’t like gamble though,,

  • girishpuri on Nov 28, 2011

    great poetry

  • FX777222999 on Nov 28, 2011

    It’s life that we gambled upon.

  • Joe Ram on Nov 28, 2011

    agree with you. thanks.

  • Eliza26 on Nov 30, 2011

    Your poems are really interesting!

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Dec 3, 2011

    I do not like gambling, but thumbs up for your poem

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