It’s Too Late

john tugano on May 5, 2010

Tags: broken heart, busted, diffident, guy, late, love, timid

A poem for those timid and diffident guys who can’t confess about what they feel.

I wish someday I could tell her

About my feelings which I tried to conceal

But I’m scared that she won’t heed me

Thus I asked how could it be?

My heart beats so fast when she’s near

And I cant tell whether it’s excitement or fear

How can I confess If this is how I feel?

Oh Lord please help me so I could tell

One day she passed by and smiled at me

She grinned so sweet that I shouted with glee

What a nice feeling I have that day

So pleasant that I won’t give it away

Days,Weeks, and Months went by so fast

And we became friends at last

But I admit I’m still a coward

I still can’t blurt that she’s my love

Often we talk to each other

Once in a while we dawdle

But every time I tend to pretend

That I want nothing but to be her friend

Soon after I can’t fight what I feel

So I said can I make it real?

Right then I professed my feelings for her

And one by one I made it clear

She stood as if she can’t believe

Oh I’m sorry that’s what she said

She told me I’m too late

Oh how poignant is my fate

With that I’ve got something to share

Don’t be timid and learn to dare

If you love someone tell them straight

For you to win the price at stake

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john tugano on May 5, 2010
tnx to cass for the subliminal photo hehehe
maeraquel on May 5, 2010
“Love, unrequited, robs me of my rest:
Love, hopeless love, my ardent soul encumbers:
Love, nightmare-like, lies heavy on my chest,
And weaves itself into my midnight slumbers!\”
William S. Gilbert

i highly advise telling her straight on.
Christine Ramsay on May 5, 2010
If you really want something you have to go for it as it will rarely come to you. A very expressive piece.

Christine
Emma Green on May 5, 2010
Very well expressed, and agreed if you want something/someone just tell them
LOVELYHONEY on May 5, 2010
its better to let her know
you loved her so
before she does
with another go
and
you crow
and
so does she
but she wouldn’t
Still know…
heidiefernandez on May 6, 2010
too late.. for you can’t go

who knows you can still blow

chance you had once

now you can’t even glance!!!!

nice work!!!! still crying? hehhehe
ronthoughts on May 6, 2010
The comments above are coming from the best poetic writer in Trionds, what can i say? You are getting in line now.
Cheers! Liked!
SU’d!
rajaryanme on May 6, 2010
Very well written sometimes its never late in life
yes me on May 6, 2010
Liked that one John. cheers
Jimmy Shilaho on May 6, 2010
How sad, we shouldn’t wait until its too late to make our intentions known.
sharda on May 6, 2010
Excellent sharing,

I like it, keep writing more.
Angela Faith on May 7, 2010
I like this. very expressive.
Carol M Creasey on May 12, 2010
Lovely poem, straight from your heart. Many thanks.
Likha on Jul 7, 2010
It pays to take the risk.
Francois Hagnere on Aug 17, 2010
Beautiful poem.
K Kristie on Aug 19, 2010
An enjoyable read. Galing mo ah!
sandcastle on Aug 20, 2010
Right on! We must always try or take a chance, you’ll never know . I’d rather fail and be in the know than not to try and not to know.

Another nice poem,over all. Nice flow of thoughts .Well written.
carissimi on Aug 25, 2010
what a beautiful poem.. i am glad i stumbled upon your poems tonight

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