I’ve Got Something

diamondpoet on Nov 6, 2009

Tags: ability, power, strength

I have the strength to conquer all things.

I’ve got something this world can’t take away.

I’ll Keep pressing forward everyday.

I’ve got something this world can’t take away.

Go ahead take your best shot I am here to play.

I’ve got something this world can’t take away.

My days are sunny even though the sky is gray.

I’ve got something this world can’t take away.

You can close the door, I’ll just push it open and go in anyway.

I’ve got something this world can’t take away.

Your words don’t offend me, I don’t care what you say.

I’ve got something this world can’t take away.

My feet are swift and I can win this relay.

I’ve got something this world can’t take away.

My clock is set there won’t be any delays.

Do you know the reason why

I can accomplish all these things today?

Is because I know how to pray.

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Teves on Nov 6, 2009
Nicely written…
Hansika on Nov 6, 2009
very good
Maxthevir on Nov 6, 2009
You have got the right mindset!
Jackie118 on Nov 6, 2009
Superb piece of poetry. I wondered where it was leading and then it all made complete sense at the end.
Themax on Nov 6, 2009
yes you know how to pray!!!!
Thanks for sharing
lillyrose on Nov 6, 2009
really great write!
johnnydod on Nov 6, 2009
good one, I wondered how it would end
Darla Cooke on Nov 6, 2009
Wonderful poem!
Sharif Ishnin on Nov 6, 2009
You’re right on the dot.
xoxo on Nov 6, 2009
I love the last line the most ‘Is because I know how to pray’. Well done.
Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 6, 2009
like a prayer warrior! nicely done!
Christine Ramsay on Nov 6, 2009
Wow! That is such a great feeling. You are so lucky to have prayer to fall back on. Lovely work

Christine
Judi Eddy on Nov 6, 2009
Really enjoyed this…..if we all knew how to pray this world maybe a better place. Judi x
Emma Green on Nov 6, 2009
Really enjoyed this one, made me smile at the end.Great use of repetition, it made the flow to the stucture of the poem that much more stronger.Good work.
raptor22 on Nov 6, 2009
Nice one.
prettybre on Nov 7, 2009
THAT…was…AWESOME…**)
Snooky on Nov 7, 2009
And to this my friend imust say
I hope like heck you stay this way
giftarist on Nov 7, 2009
A great write!
Patrick Regoniel on Nov 7, 2009
That’s creative!
deep blue on Nov 7, 2009
Awe inspiring. We were all gifted to heal and strengthen ourselves.
Thewoodlandelf on Nov 8, 2009
Beautiful words.
PhoenixRox on Nov 9, 2009
Excellent… Faith and positive attitude can get anything done. Thanks diamond. I have some new stuff out. You might wanna check it out
Eunice Tan on Nov 10, 2009
Very encouraging
Gail Nobles on Nov 10, 2009
Great strength!
TroostAvenue on Nov 10, 2009
Sorry, diamond, I really cannot comment on religion based emotions. I have not been there for a great many years and do not care to return.

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