A poem of the story of poor Jack O Lantern that was not welcome in heaven or hell.

 

Jack oh Jack,

you should have never,

turned you’re back.

 

For you’re godly guidance that you lacked.

 

God would have placed you on the right track.

 

The devils eyes spotted you.

 

You knew how to use a cross or two,

you’re deal with the devil ruined you.

 

Even at the pearly gates you did not breath,

a word of you’re mistakes.

 

You left it to late,

to enter his heavenly gates.

 

Even the devil no longer waits.

 

You took the devils bate,

and walked far away.

 

Well this is what they say.

 

With you’re lantern that,

now bares you’re name.

 

You have only you’re self to blame.

Jack O Lantaren no one will,

ever forget you’re name.

 

 

 

 

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  • Darla Cooke on Sep 28, 2009

    Great poem!

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 28, 2009

    An interesting and well written piece.

    Christine

  • Goodselfme on Sep 28, 2009

    This has a nice swing to it and a fun topic. Well done!

  • writing4angels on Sep 28, 2009

    very well written. Not only Jack but millions of people forget to carry on good tasks and are trapped in this world of pleasure forgetting God and end up as sinners!

    Very well projected plight in today’s time.

  • Lee Ness on Sep 28, 2009

    Hi cardy,
    Very neat poem about the pumpkin love the flow to it very pretty
    Lee ness
    http://authspot.com/poetry/limerick-poem-i-am/

  • chantell on Sep 28, 2009

    Cardy this poem get a Standing Ovation. Well said. :)

  • Shawn O on Sep 28, 2009

    Great poem and message. Thanks for sharing.

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 28, 2009

    Fun and very nicely done.

  • The Cinders on Oct 16, 2009

    Nice imagery and creativity.
    Bria.

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