Jeff ended up killing a bee that made him upset because he thinks the bee has a soul.

Jeff was excited 

When he saw a golden bee

Buzzing in his bedroom

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He wanted to catch it so badly

That he ran to his mother

And told her

He explained that he wished

To keep it in a jar

- – -

Jeff had other plans

For this bee

He thought that he could

Get honey

- – -

His mother assured him

That it would take more

Than one bee to produce honey

“You’ll have to have a hive,”

She told him

- – -

His mother gave him a jar

Warned him that bees sting

And he should be careful

Jeff told her he understood

And set out to catch this bee

That buzzed and flew

Quickly around him

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The bee became angry

Attempted to sting Jeff

And he ended up smashing it 

Against a wall

- – -

Jeff began crying

“I’ve killed it!”

He told his mother, “I’ll be going

to hell.”

- – -

“Never mind,” his mother comforted him

“The bee could have stung you.  You

did the right thing”

- – -

“Don’t bees have souls like us?”

He asked.  ”No,” said his mother.

“I believe they do.  They’re alive like us?”

- – -

“Yes, they’re alive like us, but 

according to our Christian faith 

they don’t have souls”

Jeff sighed, wiping tears from his eyes

- – -

What Jeff’s mother didn’t say

Although she knew

Was that in Jainism that have over 

Four million followers worldwide  

They believe that all living things

Have souls and their faith

Subscribes to non-violence

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Towards all living beings

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Comments (14)
  • Rosettaartist1 on Aug 29, 2011

    Nicely worded and good imagery.

  • yellow rose on Aug 29, 2011

    great

  • wonder on Aug 29, 2011

    A good message shared so naturally.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Aug 29, 2011

    So creative.

  • PR Mace on Aug 29, 2011

    Cute.

  • neopisiva on Aug 29, 2011

    Good points shared. Thanks!

  • lapasan on Aug 29, 2011

    Other creatures such as bees have lives too. You have depicted here our relationship with them and other animals.

  • Martin Kloess on Aug 30, 2011

    oddly clever

  • Martin Kloess on Aug 30, 2011

    oddly clever.

  • papaleng on Aug 30, 2011

    nice story cutely written.

  • Dreamy777 on Aug 30, 2011

    awesome article

  • MountainGirl on Aug 30, 2011

    Nice share.

  • Joe Ram on Aug 30, 2011

    Another great one.

  • Raj the Tora on Sep 14, 2011

    Very good post here. Lovely description of feelings! However, I strongly believe that every living being (including trees) have soul. No two ways about it. A tree in this life can become human in next life. There are no differentiations as higher souls or lower souls. A stone is as good as the strong-minded man.

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