This one is of people close to you, loved ones, dying. The things you feel when it happens. This one also includes Jenny. Please tell me what you think!

Jenny and her grandmother were always close

they were together with each other the most

jenny was 18 her grandmother was 80

when they were together they acted so crazy

When Jenny was with her she always had fun

she told her grandmother more things than she ever told anyone

her grandma knew everything about her and jenny did too

you always saw them together

stuck together like glue

they got along great and never had a fight

jenny would sleep at her grandmas most every night

but her grandma was getting old

and she was getting sick as the doctors told

she wouldn’t last long

this was her last time for fun

she never told Jenny so Jenny never knew

that her grandmas life would be over soon

one day as jenny made her way to grandmas this would be the scene

she opened the door with a smile and then let out a scream

there on the floor lay her grandmother

this tore up Jenny like no other 

the tears rolled down as her smile turned frown

this couldn’t be happening why this why now

that day

jenny became her boyfriends fiancée’  

and she ran to her grandmothers to spread the news

this couldn’t of happened

how come she never knew

Jenny lay there for hours crying and weeping

her heart was torn

thrown away

seeping

with the memories of them two

she wished she could have been ready

she wished she would of knew

at the funeral Jenny gave a speech

of her memories of her grandmother

everything she said sweet

how she made Jenny happy every single day

how she couldn’t of been greater in any possible way

there on Jenny’s mantelpiece still till this day

lay a picture of her grandmother

and the memories that still stay

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  • Jaron Riddick on Jun 24, 2009

    You Poetic style is simple yet affective i enjoy reading it

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