A longing.

I need you,
Not for what I can get,
But for what I can give.
Family surrounds me,
Let me share all my kin with you,
For once again…with who you are.
You came you saw you conquered
For me?
I need you

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  • sue mcverry on Dec 2, 2008

    A thought-provoking piece of work.

  • joystick7 on Dec 2, 2008

    We need you too. Keep writing :)

  • Countrymom on Dec 2, 2008

    Beautifully written and well said! Blessings!

  • Able B on Dec 2, 2008

    A pithy little poem. thnx

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 3, 2008

    Beautiful poem – I love it.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Jasin on Dec 3, 2008

    Sweet, short, and from the heart.
    Great job, and god bless you.

  • eddiego65 on Dec 3, 2008

    Lovely work. Yes, we need Jesus who came, saw and conquered sin and death!

  • Morgana on Dec 5, 2008

    I feel the same way about Jesus–need him in my life

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