Jia So Sexy

zulfiqarali5 on Dec 3, 2010

Tags: care, Dress, feelings, heart, love, poem, sexy, station, suddenly, vanished

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Poem.

i met a girl

on the way

she had in red dress

looking so sexy

i feel something

in my heart

some one whispering

that she is the one

and suddenly

she vanished

and gone !

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Comments (20)

Larry Fish on Dec 3, 2010
Interesting poem, keeps me thinking.
srbasu on Dec 3, 2010
Very nice poem, Thanks for Sharing.
Anupatil on Dec 3, 2010
Nice poem.
John Cornor on Dec 3, 2010
Nice to read
clandestinef on Dec 3, 2010
Great work. Keep it up. Hoping to read more from you now…
ceegirl on Dec 3, 2010
lovely poem
sloanie on Dec 3, 2010
The times this has happened to me!
PSingh1990 on Dec 3, 2010
Nice Share.
Love Nancy on Dec 3, 2010
Very Good Post.

Thanks for share.
J Anderson on Dec 3, 2010
Nice Post. Thanks!
The Soul Explorer on Dec 3, 2010
Nice piece!
LCM Linda on Dec 4, 2010
Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
Christine Ramsay on Dec 4, 2010
An interesting piece.
Lord Banks on Dec 4, 2010
I tell ya women can do that ! Good poem. LB
Will Dee on Dec 4, 2010
Deep message
Dheeraj Rohira on Dec 5, 2010
nice poem
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 7, 2010
u mean GONE WITH THE WIND gr888888888888
s j tubrazy on Jan 6, 2011
nice poem
jamesII on Jan 13, 2011
She was a real woman–if you know what I mean! Cool! I wish she would resurface! I need a woman like her! Cool!
sanataryal on Apr 10, 2011
Simply the best.

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