Dedicated to a person I had loved but time won’t allow things to happen it.

Our trodden way had crossed
…sometime ago
introduced by people close to us
yet, don’t have discernible talks,
to know you better and up close.
until we haven’t catch sight of each other
because of individual propensity
that steer us with no communications
for much of the time…

At some point…
we almost have forgotten each other
but time has its own way
of bringing us back anew,
to each others attention,
to cherish each others existence.

From then on…
I keep hoping to be with you
so close, with meager space in between
to grapple you once more and
there’s nothing that can desist
‘coz i’m falling in love with you
…my friend.

 

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  • JPSO on Aug 11, 2008

    Well, with love all things are possible. Best to you and may your hope and wishes do come true!

  • eerised on Aug 11, 2008

    fact in nowadays is that true love becomes rare to find…….
    and if it is really meant to be , fate will find a way to meet even the farthest both ends.goodluck……..

  • zephyrn95 on Aug 13, 2008

    spoken from the heart!love knows no boundaries even time,space and distance…

  • mommy on Aug 13, 2008

    congrats. i did not know that youre a poet then. we love you here.

  • Zarnie on Aug 13, 2008

    Bravo! Bravo! Nice.. expressions of a person truly in love… lucky girl..

  • ylette on Aug 21, 2008

    huh?!?!!!? dont understand…… is there sumthing i need to know..or this is poem is just a pigment of imagination then?

  • mommy on Aug 21, 2008

    to whom is this poem addressed?

  • mommy again on Aug 23, 2008

    if i dont know you i would have in mind that this is your own experience… but i know its not yours… thats being an artist. we try to copy others emotion just to release it. keep up the good work

  • Vt on Oct 15, 2008

    bor, u okay? In real life or your just being an artist? Past experience?
    Yes, that\’s true. No matter how much u loved that person and how much you wanted to be with them
    Time won\’t let it be. I felt that and it does hurt. You don\’t know how to pick up yourself after you lost them.
    I guess in our journey through life you will meet the one that you cannot be with. It\’s sad but it happens too.

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