I thought I had a job.

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I had a opportunity to do a job

Working on the job

Bob said this is not a job for you

He said to me you’re making a big blob

We have to take you off the job

I stood back an sob.

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  • Atanacio on Feb 26, 2010

    Cee, this made me chuckle good job or lack of a job LOL

  • JannyCZ on Feb 26, 2010

    Aww so sad. Nicely written.

  • diamondpoet on Feb 26, 2010

    So sorry something else will come along, just be faithful.

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 26, 2010

    This is a delightful read…like Cat in the Hat.

  • giftarist on Feb 26, 2010

    Good one.

  • yes me on Feb 26, 2010

    An other nice one CG
    Have you got your giggle meter on this week?

  • ken bultman on Feb 26, 2010

    Close one door, open another.

  • Reilley on Feb 26, 2010

    Keep on writing!

  • Jamie Myles on Feb 26, 2010

    AWWWW. so sad.

  • Marie Antoinette on Feb 26, 2010

    A better one will come up for you.

  • colette234 on Feb 26, 2010

    How many people clicked on this, thinking it was a lead to a real job? I still liked it though. :)

  • Lord Banks on Feb 26, 2010

    The master of the short poem. LB

  • Versatile Artist on Feb 26, 2010

    And just when you thought things were looking up and everyting shatters.But still a good short piece to read despite that,maybe the next job you find you can keep.

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 26, 2010

    Oh my, I hope your next jobs works out better.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Feb 26, 2010

    Nice poem though the rhyme seems a little forced

  • Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Feb 27, 2010

    Nice Sharing

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 27, 2010

    Good one

  • indu on Feb 27, 2010

    nice one

  • apagung on Feb 27, 2010

    very nice

  • apagung on Feb 27, 2010

    Very sad to hear that

  • drAnn on Feb 27, 2010

    Lol, that SO reminds me of office work in a big city.

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 27, 2010

    Nice word play.

  • sambhafusia on Feb 27, 2010

    nice share.by best wishes to u friend……

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 27, 2010

    Very nice one….

  • albert1jemi on Feb 27, 2010

    great write

  • monica55 on Feb 27, 2010

    That is Cute.
    Monica.

  • Patrick Regoniel on Feb 28, 2010

    There’s a better one waiting. :-)

  • Will Dee on Feb 28, 2010

    I feel your sadness in this poem. Thanks for sharing

  • R G Lowry on Feb 28, 2010

    Keep up the good work. keep everyone smiling :) x

  • Kakraba Afful on Mar 1, 2010

    This is one beautiful radiance of a poem.

  • jamesII on Mar 3, 2010

    “Sobbed!” Good poem for a flunky! The job was proably a blob anyway–and the boss–a blog!

  • fragile18 on Mar 27, 2010

    thanks for sharing,
    i wish my parents would allow me to have a summer job,

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