Love can be the highest truth of all.

In our crowded and busy village of San Juanico,
There lived a neighbor whom we called Alberto;
He was not friendly, but traded talks to us though,
In refined and cultured manner without much ado.

One day while I tossed a glass of wine by the street
Juan Alberto passed; I beckoned and gave him a seat;
I was honored and told him my grieve sorrows of late
About the dear love I’ve acquired but lost so swift.

Alas! I was run with things he called glorious wisdom
That he drummed on me with claims he called science
And philosophy that I simply could not understand;
And he claimed that love was a horrible frailty of man.

Sensing I was quizzed by the depth of his mind,
My unmarried neighbor of around forty left me behind
With a typical face of a cynic; then I pursued life resigned,
While himself proceeded life still the man of his kind.

Years have come and go and I’ve found love anew;
I was deeply sad but this time I was happy I knew;
And one Sunday afternoon, my friend Juan Alberto
In his lonely home, he hanged himself with no one saw.

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Comments (13)
  • papaleng on Oct 1, 2008

    well done Onofre though the ending was sad..another nice poem..

  • neelam pandey on Oct 1, 2008

    a nice blend of thoughts and the ending is developed on its own without being abrupt, gr8 piece of work!!

  • acecampillo on Oct 1, 2008

    A great poem. The ending was sad indeed, but I liked it.

  • william rodriguez on Oct 1, 2008

    Nice poem. Is this a true to life story? Poor Alberto.

  • MMV Abad on Oct 2, 2008

    Oh! So sad! But, I guess it’s better that way.

  • Balzac on Oct 2, 2008

    Great poetic story. I understand beliefs are the basis of decisions. I know there is no other way except love. Thank you for your thoughts on the matter.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Oct 2, 2008

    A great poem indeed. Thanks for sharing it with us.

  • tracy sardelli on Oct 3, 2008

    So sad, so tragic, but a lovely poem, thank you.

  • eddiego65 on Oct 3, 2008

    Nice poem! But the ending was so tragic.

  • Unofre Pili on Oct 3, 2008

    Thank you all. The ending has really to be that way, pointing the triumph of love over that of any field of human endeavor when it comes to giving happiness that every human craves for.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Oct 4, 2008

    bago ito bro a,nice piece bro,poet k din pala e,

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 5, 2008

    Such a sad poem but sad things happen and it is wonderful that we can record them. You take care, Ruby

  • Blue Buttefly on Nov 13, 2008

    Bravo! you’re also a poet?

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