The moon is half-cut

and i am drowning in its intoxicating radiance

deliriously entranced

trying to read its duplicate

wavering in the endless stream

reflection of my own prognostication

echoing below the surface

trees whispering free falling secrets

chirping songs replaced with bickering

eyes so cold, rhythmic repercussions

condescending stares from perverse branches

short breath of the air, a false caress

chicanery chiming inside

through the insects chanting

but mine is a defenseless verse

hiding the intensity, inevitability

leaving only the contortion of truth

the juggernaught is rustling passed

through the tall squalid grass

procrastinating with the persuasion of limitless time

pretense of this empty identity

a canopy of dilemmas i must face

head on, eyes open

to stop the blind refuge

in this relentless act of night

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  • suhail on Jun 18, 2010

    wow this one is deep i had to go through it twice to get some understanding of your picture … you should start a fan club or some thing :)

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 18, 2010

    Beautiful lines

  • flowerrose on Jun 18, 2010

    Interesting post. You’re a funny person. Cheer

  • emmy19 on Jun 18, 2010

    Interesting Poem

  • lillyrose on Jun 18, 2010

    great work ;-)

  • Eldridge on Jun 18, 2010

    Gee, I’m somewhat envious of your skillful poetry! Wonderful work. I had to rethink twice whether if it is a reflection or a mull mock at oneself >_<

  • wonder on Jun 18, 2010

    What descriptions! Fascinating.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jun 18, 2010

    You’ve got gr8 writing skills. Excellent words.

  • NIYATI BHAT on Jun 18, 2010

    WOW! YOUR VOCABULARY IS GREAT AND CHOICE OF WORDS IS GOOD…I ALWAYS LOVE READING UR POEMS. KEEP IT UP! :)

  • hope2010 on Jun 18, 2010

    Good collection and usage of words. Thanks and keep writing.

  • TwiKnight on Jun 18, 2010

    Nice imagery, I really love it! :)

  • heidiefernandez on Jun 19, 2010

    You are really a genius with your words and sentence!!! Good Job!!

  • Lord Banks on Jun 19, 2010

    Excellent work I like it keep on writing. LB

  • P Hayden on Jun 28, 2010

    awesome piece……you bloody rock!! ;)

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