I could almost smell the smoke…cough cough Great imagery.

truly visual^^

Interesting imagery. A bit disturbing, I think. I can see a hint of darkness here.

thanks, guys. this is actually one of my favorite ones that I wrote. reminds me so of my life back in IL. it was a combination of that phase and my life back in the PI.
funny that RB thinks it’s a bit disturbing. i don’t see it at all. but then again we all have different views /perceptions of whatever it is we read.

brilliantly written… enjoyed reading