Certain people when they come to ones home to visit. Seem to have only eyes for ones belongings. Especially when one comes to form a relationship first. Then they slowly start taking over all your possessions. and taking over your hard earnt life. I have spoken to many women who have been misled in this way. So I thought of this verse for all who have been decieved.

Yes! Yes!

Come in!….

Take what you want!

It’s free!

Yes! Yes!

You can have this!

You can have that!

Oh yes!…

And my personal belongings too!

Yes! Yes!

Take my hard earnings

For this you were yearning!

Welcome to my house!

You can even take the mouse!

They come with a fiddle

And jump in the middle

Taking all like robbers

From the saucepan to the house knocker

Yes! Yes!

When you let them all in

They only come for certain things

Only your existence they can’t win!

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  • Raj the Tora on Oct 17, 2010

    Very true. They not just take the belongings, but peace of mind too

  • MaxBuceo on Oct 17, 2010

    Nice post. Thank for share

  • Sangeeta Chaudhary on Oct 17, 2010

    Good and unusual topic for poetry.

  • mimmer30 on Oct 18, 2010

    Very clever and well created.

  • albert1jemi on Oct 18, 2010

    well written

  • papaleng on Oct 18, 2010

    A very cute poem.

  • krrymarie on Oct 20, 2010

    This is very true.
    A good poem

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Oct 23, 2010

    Interesting way to see life, as a woman.

  • yes me on Oct 24, 2010

    A great write enjoyed cheers

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