Just a Few Hours

Goodselfme on Oct 20, 2008

Sights and feelings from evening to a new day.

As the stratus clouds are sandwiched around the moon

They flow as if for a purpose, they have been strewn.

Quiet breaths of the night surround me into a lull

Making the environment anything but dull.

Many a dream has been deposited in the night

Neatly filed away with the appearance of daylight.

Taking the refreshing newness of a brand new day

Lightly stepping forward in a most thankful way.

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Comments (9)

rainbow on Oct 20, 2008
a very refreshing poem one must look forward to..thank you for sharing
geri on Oct 20, 2008
Like this Poem it was very optimistic!
Tom Woodside on Oct 20, 2008
good poem. thanks for the imagery. it was well written.

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Kim Buck on Oct 20, 2008
Aren’t we blessed when night rolls into the morning?
Fabian C on Oct 20, 2008
Mmm… my favorite time. To the dawn watchers!
Darla Smith on Oct 20, 2008
I really like this poem. It’s beautiful.
Jamie Marie Hall on Oct 20, 2008
The poem was very beautiful.
Eric Mendoza on Oct 20, 2008
The last two lines say it all, and the imagery in the rest of the lines is spectacular. Well done
Will Gray on Oct 20, 2008
Great write with fantastic imagery!

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