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Just a Little Patience

deep blue on Apr 18, 2010
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The thing about a patient wait is the opportunity of seeing your luck unfolding.



Sometimes when you’re down and so lonely

Waiting for articles to get published so slowly

A good song is a fitting resort than human folly

Like an exhaustive play with your one and only

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  • LoveDoctor on Apr 18, 2010

    I know the feeling. I agree with your intro in bold. This is a very creative write. I vote that I like it.

  • maeraquel on Apr 18, 2010

    short and simple.enjoyed the video.

  • ceegirl on Apr 18, 2010

    yes all it take is patience

  • Annie Hintsala on Apr 18, 2010

    Cool.

  • Joie Schmidt on Apr 18, 2010

    Wow, thanks for sharing this song – - never heard of it before, it’s beautiful*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Goodselfme on Apr 18, 2010

    Nice share.TX

  • ronthoughts on Apr 18, 2010

    I go the feeling Will.
    nice music video!
    I will be patient too, thanks kabayan!

  • ken bultman on Apr 19, 2010

    The song was pretty good. The other thing about a patient wait is sometimes he could die before he sees a doctor.

  • ken bultman on Apr 19, 2010

    The song was nice. Another problem with a patient wait is that he could die before he gets to see a doctor.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Apr 19, 2010

    Patience is a virtue. I’m sure, friend, you do it pretty well this way. Clicked you “liked it”

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 19, 2010

    I love that song and it suits this piece so well. Good work.

    Christine

  • Francois Hagnere on Apr 19, 2010

    Yes we need a lot of patience when we’re down and lonely…
    After the rain, there is always sunshine! Take care my friend.

  • rizzei on Apr 19, 2010

    NICE ONE DEEP BLUE, YEAH THAT’S RIGHT.. :)
    LET’S SING ALONG ^_^

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Apr 19, 2010

    In life patience covers a lot of shortcomings and can serve as a buffer zone where you wait out a small phase to discover the truth of a matter instead of rushing in with false perceptions.

  • Atanacio on Apr 19, 2010

    clever very clever

  • Gail Nobles on Apr 19, 2010

    Yes, patience is important.

  • giftarist on Apr 20, 2010

    Nicely written, kabayan.

  • xoxo on Apr 25, 2010

    Very thoughtful poem, Will. But me definitely, ‘no patience’. I have a lot to do in the real world. So if they don’t want to publish it, I tend to go to other sites lol

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