A passionate roundelay.

Beloved,
Just a look at your eyes makes My day
Hope those pair shines everyday

When those pair blinks and wink
My mind wonders and has no link
Firm eyelids enhances the beauty
Curved shapes make it look pretty

Beloved,
Just a look at your eyes makes My day
Provides Me with bliss and contented way

I hope to see those day & night
So beautifully crafted, always delight
They speak a lot about the soul
Always guided with  textured whole
Beloved,
Just a look at your eyes makes My day
Fills up My heart in everyway

Always thank God for giving them existence
I'm happy to feel those pair's presence
Proud to have them always near
Never wanna see in them a drop of tear

Beloved,
Just a look at your eyes makes My day
Stunning are your beautiful eyes, I solemnly say.

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  • Aiyanna on Jun 1, 2011

    Like mirrored lakes I stare at those eyes,
    In placidity I see the glittering ties.
    Reflecting the image I see put forth,
    Taking in experience to suit us both.

    Shimmering beauty, laughing eyes,
    Gushing waterfalls amidst cries.
    Reflective in passion, emboldened in love,
    Spreading compassion, just like the Above.

    For they are the reflections of the soul,
    With respect and nurture to make you whole.
    With magical experiences they beauty see,
    Becoming one with this mystery.

    Eyes of Creation, haunting my heart,
    Like shimmering lakes they do part.
    To tantilise like diamonds reflecting light,
    To scrutinise like cameras at a fine sight.

    But the greatest beauty comes with love,
    It opens the heart to the One Above.
    To caputre the intrepid magic in those Eyes,
    Living and loving through smiles and Cries.

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Jun 1, 2011

    Beautiful simply beautiful :)

  • Shavin on Jun 3, 2011

    good share

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