good one

Very interesting poetry. Simple and enjoyable.

Nice poem Jennamazingg Thanks for sharing your talent, friend.

Best regards,
Blu

Great poem.

just as you were walking away,
you wrote a nice poem

Ah, such thought-provoking questions arise. Just as you were walking away – walking away from where. Just as you were walking away, you embarked on a new adventure towards the future – with joy, with thanksgiving, with anticipation, and perhaps with a little bit of apprehension.

You were given a new lease on life. Be glad and rejoice in it. Never reflect on the past too much because it can bring so much pain.

You are very good and writing poetry. I won’t attempt to give you feedback because I don’t have any expertise in this field; however, I will tell you that I do so enjoy.

dont try to walk away. be close. WE all love you and your poems

It’s very good poetry.

i like the rhythm, nice.

nice

great and a loveley piece..

excellent work