..

Just as I was walking away,

the sun rose again.

Just as I was walking away,

I was given a new way to begin.

Just as I was walking away,

A lent hand reached out.

Just as I was walking away,

I discovered what life is all about.

Just as I was walking away,

and I had my worst foot forward

Just as I was walking away,

You made me walk back toward.

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Comments (13)
  • albert1jemi on Nov 10, 2010

    good one

  • Abram Mahlaba on Nov 11, 2010

    Very interesting poetry. Simple and enjoyable.

  • BluSphere on Nov 11, 2010

    Nice poem Jennamazingg :) Thanks for sharing your talent, friend.

    Best regards,
    Blu

  • rose15 on Nov 11, 2010

    Great poem. :)

  • ggoksel23 on Nov 11, 2010

    just as you were walking away,
    you wrote a nice poem :)

  • Borlok VA on Nov 11, 2010

    Ah, such thought-provoking questions arise. Just as you were walking away – walking away from where. Just as you were walking away, you embarked on a new adventure towards the future – with joy, with thanksgiving, with anticipation, and perhaps with a little bit of apprehension.

    You were given a new lease on life. Be glad and rejoice in it. Never reflect on the past too much because it can bring so much pain.

    You are very good and writing poetry. I won’t attempt to give you feedback because I don’t have any expertise in this field; however, I will tell you that I do so enjoy. :)

  • chhikara on Nov 12, 2010

    dont try to walk away. be close. WE all love you and your poems

  • Melinda J on Nov 12, 2010

    :)

  • Moses Ingram on Nov 12, 2010

    It’s very good poetry.

  • amilia snow on Nov 14, 2010

    i like the rhythm, nice.

  • Yvonne K on Nov 14, 2010

    nice

  • reciel tanaid on Nov 16, 2010

    great and a loveley piece..

  • martinrojas on Dec 27, 2010

    excellent work

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