Just Fix It

ichyru rouge on Aug 28, 2009

Tags: alone, hate, plumber, Tears

This isnt really a poem. just personal experience again. ever feel like your past keeps coming up and biting you in the butt,no matter how hard you try to move on???

I’m just a stain in your heart. A bug in your windshield of life.

Wash me;I’ll fade.

Brush me off;I’ll leave.

Forget me and my eyes.

Those eyes that you loved so very much.

They knew you very well..

Now all they can do is flow like a broken faucet.

Toyed with by a less than par plumber.

You horrible plumber.

Can’t even finish the job you started.

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BradONeill on Aug 28, 2009
One theme I see recurring is you expect these other people to fix what is wrong with you. This is a good emotional piece. Nobody is going to fix you but you.
alc on Aug 28, 2009
Brad always has strong words when it comes to anyone’s writing but it’s true!! This was a nice write!!
ichyru rouge on Aug 28, 2009
o i dont want ppl to fix my problems. i want this guy [my ex]to stop popping up in my life and hurting my emotions. i dont want any1 trying to fix my emotioons but i do c how it looks like i do…just wanted to make sure yu understood that tho
Ladyforlorn on Aug 28, 2009
You will look back in years to come and wonder how this guy ever got to you so much. You may even meet him on the street and feel nothing what so ever towards him.
maranatha on Sep 3, 2009
You must text a lot, LOL….

It’s hard to have to face a guy that broke your heart day after day. Brings you heart in your throat every time. But it will fade, I promise.
Petalm on Oct 2, 2009
No hard feelings about the comment you left on my piece about the punk! I enjoy your poetry, when it’s from the heart you can feel it. Anyway I’ve added you as a friend.

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