I would say from the various things I have read of your – there is a great beauty in you. Your last couple of poems I think will touch a lot of people very personally. Well done – and if you are feeling like this now, then I also hope you wake up tomorrow and all is ok too. Peace be with you dude.

Thank you for sharing this S A. I feel this way sometimes, I wrote “Sadness without reason” to explain this feeling. You are a great writing and you are loved. Don’t let the blues get the best of you.
Your Friend F J McCarthy

This is true for many. But those suffering, need to understand they are not alone. Very good.

Nothing is ever wasted. The limb cannot grow without all those leaves; and the leaves turn into mulch needed by the tree when they fall down. We may be small parts, but needed parts. I’ve been following your writing for a while now; you are bright and beautiful within. Everyone has their dark spots. Hang in there, this, too, shall pass.

Good piece. Focus on the day ahead, and if that is to hard, focus on the hour.
Thanks,
Clay

Let me reiterate what the Bible says: “This too shall pass.” We all have our moments much like yours. It’s just that some are not as brave as you to come out in the open. You are special. Everyone is and Life is still beautiful, SA.

I have felt like that a million times…but the very fact that you are thinking along these lines indicates that you are lovely inside…as for the troubles, just remember that the only thing constant is change.

I had a couple of days like that last week for various reasons, it’s impossible to explain the emptiness but you express it so well again. I really like ‘they don’t realise it’s their time to go…’. I hope you feel better soon.

well, this is an honest poem, full of confusion, full of emotions. i believe each of us sometimes feel that way. good work!

I see by all the comments ahead of me that by now you know you are not alone in feeling this way. Writers, in particular, seem to struggle with depression. Can’t say why. I know I do and to the extent that I can’t even function at times. Writing seems to help, so keep expressing yourself, even if it’s not published, a journal helps.
Then there are times when you aren’t depressed but are able to write about it and hopefully this is one of those times. : )

“God I hope it’s just for tonight…
Please let me be ok when I wake up…
I have no reason to cry but here I am…
Don’t let it be for months this time…”
those are my favorite lines. Beautiful poem. So sad. I’ve definitely been here before.

somber.. sad.. gloomy.. but still uplifting because of the prayer.. there is hope, not just for tonight but forever..

Very well expressed,
This is deep and intense.
I wonder the same thing too
at times.
I hope you feel better

Writing can be our outlet to express ourselves.
I hope the best for you.God bless,my friend!

By chance…do you write fictional pieces or things that you either can relate to or have known someone who went thru it. You have an wonderful way of putting emotion into poetry!

it is often thought that your best work is done in sorrow. I think that this is true. The emotions are so strong. with this said….sorrow is so much more intense I believe. Your work is beautiful, earthy and sad…your words ring true to my heart.